I gathered feedback about the outcome of my Arts Leadership Project from the audience and speakers at the Borderlines Film Festival and from discussing it with the BFI Film Academy group.
Positive Feedback about 'Disconnected'
- The theme of technology was very relevant for our age group
- The use of music and sound effects was effective in building tension
- The ending was good, the audience didn't see it coming
- The ending was good, the audience didn't see it coming
- The focus was sharp throughout
Negative Feedback about 'Disconnected'
- The plot needed more substance
- It became tedious after a short amount of time due to repeated shots and lack of variation
I agree with all of these comments and am especially pleased that the audience did not guess the twist of the film, as this was what we were most worried about. To address the negative feedback, I agree that we did not have a very strong storyline and that the film would have been more interesting with a greater variation of shots. I think that this could have been improved if we had had longer to plan.
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